2) Reflection on the feedback from Elevator Pitch No. 1: The feedback that I got was in my opinion positive, although one person said that my product is similar to the idea in "Cloudy With a Chance of Meatballs" but I never saw that movie so I am not sure of that similarity. I think that people liked the Shark Tank approach and thought that if this product could be produced at a reasonable price point then customers would definitely be willing to buy it.
3) What did you change based on the feedback? As you can see in the video, I am very sick while recording this and did not have the same passion as in my first video. I was also going to be more enthusiastic in the second elevator pitch, but since I have had the flue for the past 10 days it was tough to muster the enthusiasm.
Hey Maxwell! I think your idea is great and you were dynamic and explain the benefits of your product well. It's funny it was compared to Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs! I guess I can somewhat see that, but I don't think I've seen the movie in a long time so I don't know! I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. If you would like to see mine, it can be found here: https://youtu.be/eAmW0dT57ZI
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ReplyDeleteI like your enthusiasm, energy and block set up. Even though your idea is a good idea it is not unique. when creating a product of that kind you need to make sure you can cover a lot of expenses that i don't think are in our budget as student. Such as, making sure the product is sanitary, making sure that the product won't create any infection or allergic reaction, you need to pass a bunch of test and regulations from the state. After all that is done then you would need to have a mass production and thats an investment that would have at least for zeros in it. and thats only to place your product in the market.
i don't see my money invested coming back to my hands soon. Therefore i would think that you have to fix your idea a little bit so it easily fits the market.
here is my pitch
http://heosorio.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Max, my favorite thing about the whole pitch was the fact that you had a visual aid and demonstrated what your product would work like! Also, good job with the cadence of your speech. I did intramural debate here at UF, and I know that the way you say things is very important. Check out my blog: http://camivilla10.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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